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Post by Aish on Nov 7, 2015 2:25:01 GMT -5
how did I know that was going to come out of your face concave yet concussive
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Post by Veritas on Nov 7, 2015 11:37:23 GMT -5
the permalink line throws me for a curve, it, takes the sharp turn.
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Post by Aish on Nov 8, 2015 2:14:33 GMT -5
I don't have a problem removing it, if recommended.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Nov 8, 2015 20:22:06 GMT -5
permalink - There is no obvious connection to the rest of the poem. It leaves me wanting to see this expanded but the strophe does stand on its own.
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Post by Veritas on Nov 8, 2015 22:59:01 GMT -5
no,no... not remove, just it WO
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