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Post by twistedangel on Aug 8, 2015 0:42:45 GMT -5
Sick to the core, you becoming a bore I heard it all before I CANT TAKE IT ANY MORE
dont blame me cos i never did pretend i aintcha ya f*ckin friend
"Oh please read an be honest"... as long as its wotcha wanna hear "Oh please agree my pain is the greatest" sure, I'll suck your ego's cock
Actually, f*ck it..i cant be arsed with it maybe ill just +1 it
at the tip of me fingers lays the worlds largest society an all i know is... i HATE its mediocrity
all the bullshit i tried to swollow after a while it all rings hollow dreary samey shitty text finally found i do have a gag reflex
would usually flush it but f*ck it ill +1 it
*Not posted this on G+ yet, an it's mostly having a go at dreadful poetry praised by dreadful poets...the poor rhyming is deliberate...hmm, but yeah I wos kinda quite drunk tho
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Aug 8, 2015 2:22:13 GMT -5
I got your humor right away. That opening strophe is comical in is forced lengthy rhyming reaffirmed and confirmed at “gag reflex.” LOL
I don’t get the “+1” reference unless it’s an RSVP but that doesn’t seem to fit the place you used it. A G+ thing I take it?
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Post by Aish on Aug 13, 2015 11:33:52 GMT -5
The humor was instantly apparent. I wrote something along the same lines for cutters once. Made me laugh, Angel.
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Post by awesomebill on Dec 30, 2015 12:41:04 GMT -5
Dats a bit graphic there sisteer, but I congratulate ya. You scurred 'o some alien DNA baby? I'd infect this whole human race in no time I tell ya'. I laughed a couple times at dis poetriesm. And dat don't be happenin' often.
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Post by twistedangel on Jan 23, 2016 2:07:29 GMT -5
Cheers Bill...yeah am gonna have to find me humour mojo again ?
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Post by awesomebill on Jan 27, 2016 9:42:04 GMT -5
Haha I know what its like to be a sick in yo' head.
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