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Post by LonelyForsaken on May 1, 2015 2:13:40 GMT -5
Sinuously twisting patterns -an insistent lover’s hands- heat shimmers caress tracing tattoos in skin my master’s mark
An agony an ecstasy speaking of heat of passion I drink its thirst
Weeping flame I see much and more under a black moon
LonelyForsaken
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Fire Sky
The moon is a black hole when the sky is afire
Sinuously twisting patterns an insistent lover’s hands shimmers of heat caress tracings on my tattooed skin leaving my master’s mark
An agony an ecstasy speaks the language of heat of passion I drink its thirst
weeping flame I see much and more
Water can burn consumed by the whole
LonelyForsaken
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Post by twistedangel on May 3, 2015 0:38:32 GMT -5
I wonder wot that mark would be ☺ if it ended with S2 id get it...but the last 2 lines am not sure of at the mo really liking the passion an imagery tho...is actually kinda hot ☺
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May 3, 2015 0:51:09 GMT -5
Post by LonelyForsaken on May 3, 2015 0:51:09 GMT -5
I’ve changed it twice since I posted it last night. It was originally titled “Fire Sky” but the original image was consumed in the passion. LOL I was trying to combine two concepts and it wasn’t working. It’s not done but I can’t seem to find the words to finish it. I’ll work on it a bit before I go to bed.
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Post by twistedangel on May 3, 2015 0:55:28 GMT -5
I reckon its 'weeping flame ' that throws it for me
why weeping ?
Tattoos an sex have long been used for like 'spirit journeys' so to see "much and more" makes sense ☺
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May 3, 2015 1:27:31 GMT -5
Post by LonelyForsaken on May 3, 2015 1:27:31 GMT -5
“why weeping ?”Desire and passion does not mean it will be fulfilled or satiated. “Tattoos an sex have long been used for like 'spirit journeys' so to see "much and more" makes sense”You got it!!! I’m not finding the words I need to finish. Perhaps that line will suffice?
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May 26, 2015 22:41:43 GMT -5
Post by LonelyForsaken on May 26, 2015 22:41:43 GMT -5
TwistedAngel - “I wonder wot that mark would be” – I’ve been thinking about this question since I first read it. Questions seldom ever throw me anymore but this one sure has. I wish I had the answer but I suppose that even if I did it wouldn’t be one that could be put into words, only shown.
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