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Post by twistedangel on Feb 16, 2015 11:53:52 GMT -5
I wish I could care but I dont
I have tried these things called 'feelings' but they hurt too much
Such pain to be found in love so why strive toward it?
Fires of light but burn Scar tissue hard as raw hide
Darkness, therein tranquility Unblemished skin as white as pure as soft as snow
Here is peace Embraced solitude, in comfort
I fester
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 16, 2015 18:27:54 GMT -5
I like all of it. I don’t agree with it, but I get it, and except for S5 it is very well written. What I really mean is that I festered there too long so now I care too much and sometimes wish I could go back. Suggestion for S5; “Darkness, therein lies tranquility Unblemished skin, white as pure soft snow”Thanks for sharing.
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krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Feb 16, 2015 21:18:19 GMT -5
For some reason...this just fits you I envision you as a smoking hot badass with a 'F-you' attitude. Oh wait...that's your avatar...my bad.
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Post by twistedangel on Feb 24, 2015 10:54:40 GMT -5
LF i think i wos trying to emphasise each word with the 'as' like a punch..hmm guess it failed then...pfft krake, f*ck you tude..check, smokin' hot..ermm well i smoke
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LSD
Crimson Soul
She needs me, but I need her.
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Post by LSD on Feb 28, 2015 13:06:03 GMT -5
That last stanza is the icing on the cake!
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