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Post by twistedangel on Jan 21, 2015 13:31:59 GMT -5
Unfurled before thee Lain across a silken sun Summers bud awaits Thine full bloom petals open Nectars scent yearning thy touch
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Post by twistedangel on Jan 21, 2015 19:11:36 GMT -5
Cheers for the reply 'thy' meaning either you or your. ..but 'thine' is a posseive pronoun, giving IMO more weight to the sentence, is here that she openly states she gives herself to him have had a quick Google/Wiki search an not come across the rule you mention, deffo will ask me english prof tho, i reckon he gets a hard on over old an middle english, he writes short stories in them OMG OLD English is just a different language altogether !!
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Post by Bastet on Feb 21, 2015 19:27:49 GMT -5
Do you have to capitalize each line? It distracts a bit.
I don't know squat about properly using thy and thine, thought I will say I want to read L4 as "thy full bloom" and L5 as "yearning thine touch". This is lovely, lush, and silky, Angel. Summer aside as it is brutally cold today this puts me in a romantic mood and makes me want to read Lord Byron by a crackling fire with a cup of tea and a pretty pretty man to touch.
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