krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Dec 27, 2014 19:38:50 GMT -5
In that space between unknown and known locked away behind my smile: secrets, I keep hidden away. The darkness there, so cold and black, could suck the light right out of your life, if set free.
Bodies lying amidst charred remains of dogs and homes, beneath swarms of angels with forks and knives, waiting to dine. Stagnant water; brown, pungent, corpse juice sitting in puddles with lines of Cherubs waiting to sup strips of skin.
Broken bones honed to spears and knives protruding from faces and eyes where they were driven by Saints. Wounded souls crawling like worms as ghosts look down on them and laugh as whirlwinds of ash blind them.
No laughter, no music, no art except the art of the destroyer who paints blood onto canvases of flesh with hair of dogs. No hope, no life, no love except the angels' love for the taste of men, burnt over beechnut.
Kittens squeezed over bowls of flesh for flavor. Puppies wrapped in skin and thrown to hounds in flames of hell. Mothers sewn to children with stitches made from intestines of sheep and goats braided together...chitterlings rope.
Dark skies, no clouds, all smoke and ash of bodies and buildings burnt for pleasure by snakes and lizards who stand like men. Screaming voices, behind each shadow, of people doused in flame, waiting to be eaten and saved from their sins.
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Dec 28, 2014 8:55:27 GMT -5
Post by windfog on Dec 28, 2014 8:55:27 GMT -5
Really dark. I'd say even darker than I think.
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Dec 29, 2014 5:09:03 GMT -5
Post by twistedangel on Dec 29, 2014 5:09:03 GMT -5
glad to see you back Mr K is this a peek into 'Krake's Inferno' ?..very very dark writing an very powerful images an i also see to sides to this write..a tortured mind but also the very real images of war...maybe a mind at war with itself ? am not gonna forget this piece in a hurry, its violence is haunting ermm kinda wierd to be asking after reading this, but..hope you had a good xmas break Krake an have a awesome New Year
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2015 5:09:40 GMT -5
Right on Krake, let loose!. I have a hint where your inspiration came from, not all higher beings are suppose to be pretty. I enjoyed the rawness of this poem I loved it.
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Post by pinkie on Feb 4, 2015 8:38:56 GMT -5
intense, dark, the bane of existence ...fears unspeakable spoken, a written nightmare...and the creator laughs i enjoyed this a lot
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krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Feb 4, 2015 18:07:32 GMT -5
Thanks everyone. Pinkie, exactly...a written nightmare. Where does the mind get such scripts for the movies it plays while we sleep?
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BloodTrails
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Feb 5, 2015 11:50:41 GMT -5
Post by BloodTrails on Feb 5, 2015 11:50:41 GMT -5
Damn you ! And I really liked this ...until Wtf man ...why did you have to pick on kittens ? Nwant a fight ? Bring it !
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