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Post by Veritas on Aug 7, 2014 16:35:38 GMT -5
Laws are not what stand the test of time Neither, I suppose do the bones of man
giant dreams & small plans reckless abandon idol hands accidents, murder… judgment The dark nature of our tragic comedy
… life gradually erodes Substance becoming nothingness The void giving birth to being
as it is a work in progress our story is subject to change some remain forever incomplete regardless, bear witness lest we forget each experience and let slip our reason for living
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mee
Crimson Soul
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Post by mee on Aug 8, 2014 7:36:36 GMT -5
the void full of nothing , the nothing full of us , numbed and nulled in reason , but very much here aren't just :_)
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Post by twistedangel on Aug 10, 2014 2:48:48 GMT -5
dark truths me only stumble is the last 2 lines of S3..not sure of its meaning..am thinking its not a afterlife but somthing more profound that I just dont get hooked from the start the opening lines are beautiful
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Post by Bastet on Oct 22, 2014 12:56:16 GMT -5
The flesh of man cannot stand the test of time, but bones linger around for millennia. Just sayin'. I don't think the final 5 lines are necessary. The piece is well served ending on " our story is subject to change". Enjoyed.
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Post by goldfinch on Oct 24, 2014 18:33:32 GMT -5
Such futility, yet you write about it and make it almost pretty.
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