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Post by Bastet on Jul 16, 2014 3:58:16 GMT -5
Lightning bugs shimmy in dusky light beyond reach moon flower unfolds
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Post by goldfinch on Jul 16, 2014 12:45:29 GMT -5
Your haiku are so elegant.
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Post by Aish on Jul 17, 2014 3:15:53 GMT -5
Bastet, this is flawless as far as I can tell. Your middle line is perfectly set.
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Post by twistedangel on Jul 18, 2014 0:41:22 GMT -5
always cool to read a good haiku
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jul 18, 2014 1:52:12 GMT -5
Very, very good! My hat off to a fellow haiku writer.
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mee
Crimson Soul
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Post by mee on Aug 6, 2014 7:20:25 GMT -5
love ku , nice one :_)
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Post by windfog on Oct 22, 2014 7:26:29 GMT -5
Great! W.F.
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Post by Bastet on Oct 22, 2014 12:50:37 GMT -5
Thank you everyone
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krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Feb 10, 2015 17:41:18 GMT -5
This is a perfect Haiku in every way.
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Post by Bastet on Feb 22, 2015 3:18:47 GMT -5
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Ravenwing and Krake.
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Post by awesomebill on Dec 16, 2015 10:51:54 GMT -5
This was just 'a like the time me and Grandpa went out to dem dere mountains and we's was looking at them there fireflies.
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