Pride Ed
Dark Initiate
I'll scream for you in whispers, because I always hated being too loud.
Posts: 35
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Post by Pride Ed on Jul 10, 2014 16:27:17 GMT -5
Ravenous Mine. By A.A.J.B.
she
swallowed all
the lilies in my
garden. then
descended
upon my
rosebushes
and delighted
in the fact
that they
resembled
her.
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Post by twistedangel on Jul 11, 2014 12:40:18 GMT -5
TBH me comment is mostly to bump this up to the top in hope somone better than me will crit this for meself I cant really connect with it..tho it reads well
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Post by Bastet on Jul 12, 2014 12:42:53 GMT -5
I LOVE this piece. It's slightly abstract, but delicious! No crit, just praise.
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Post by goldfinch on Jul 12, 2014 12:51:59 GMT -5
This is awesome!
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BloodTrails
Dark Initiate
-- Stuck on grins --
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Post by BloodTrails on Feb 6, 2015 6:50:04 GMT -5
Slightly erotic, this seems to me. Hidden symbols in here in a garden of lust maybe. Cool work
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