krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Jun 8, 2014 19:49:05 GMT -5
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Post by twistedangel on Jun 9, 2014 12:40:02 GMT -5
this is a head scratcher ok so I get images of cremation an dumping the ashes on to a loved ones grave..the rain thing is pretty cool BTW but who to dance..other dead people...us? an if us then how cos ermm well your down there also why dance? Are we celebrating your rejoining your lover so few lines leading to many more questions...wierdly I do like this
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Post by Aish on Jun 9, 2014 13:38:12 GMT -5
It's short, visceral, great imagery, and for my fire obsessed self, Beautiful. I found it to be organic and sensual, very much reminded me of the cycle fire plays in the forest. It's destructive, but that destruction leads to new birth.
"When the dead come back you dance".
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Post by Bastet on Jun 10, 2014 2:52:32 GMT -5
Darkly delightful!
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Pride Ed
Dark Initiate
I'll scream for you in whispers, because I always hated being too loud.
Posts: 35
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Post by Pride Ed on Jun 24, 2014 21:43:35 GMT -5
I've been finding a lot of really good, short pieces lately, and this is one of them. I love this one a lot. Its different from a lot of the other stuff you posted, which isn't a bad thing whatsoever. I'd love to see more like this though!
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