krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Jun 8, 2014 14:13:05 GMT -5
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Post by Bastet on Jun 21, 2014 15:32:36 GMT -5
Just a note to let you know I've read it and will return with thoughts.
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Post by windfog on Jun 22, 2014 7:42:50 GMT -5
Really - very deep and clever work! W.F.
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Post by Veritas on Jun 28, 2014 14:07:29 GMT -5
not into the rhyme or the repetition, the fatherly love message is touching to say the least.
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