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Post by Veritas on May 20, 2014 17:27:35 GMT -5
A poem? It seems to be lacking in that aspect, not that a poem can't be short or even questioning, seems like a clip from a journal. Also, gurney = one of those things they wheel you into an operating room on. I suspect you meant girly.
-LMS
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Post by sambo on May 23, 2014 7:16:55 GMT -5
Its something from my poetry book just. Gurney = a word we use here. Means cryin, whinging, givin off about.
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Post by Veritas on May 24, 2014 14:14:32 GMT -5
is it a real word or some inside thing you came up with?
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Post by sambo on May 25, 2014 4:59:38 GMT -5
Its a slang word we use in ireland
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Post by Veritas on May 25, 2014 18:17:00 GMT -5
crazy, right on
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Post by nibbana on May 27, 2014 11:42:30 GMT -5
I like the sentiment in this. For me it seems more journal/conversation than prose though. Writing only has one t (your title).
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