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Post by Aish on Apr 18, 2014 22:50:53 GMT -5
Only I can change the weather by striking the flint in my eye:
aware of bondage
I'm ending this acoustic sedition.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 20, 2014 11:40:01 GMT -5
This could as much be a metaphor for the end of the world as anything. Which begs the question that if God/ the creator / creation itself is in bondage, is there any wonder that souls are lost. That's just how I interpreted it, but then I'm in a mood where everything is broken today.
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Post by Aish on Apr 25, 2014 1:28:34 GMT -5
I like where you took your interpretation. Thank you.
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Post by Bastet on Apr 25, 2014 11:53:31 GMT -5
This is an interesting use of atmospheric symbolism. The Greeks associated weather with the Gods, as well as feast and famine as have many other cultures. Here you also make allusion to the Bible in Matthew 7:5 (at least that is what occurred to me) but your plank is instead a flint - so you are a firestarter - if your acoustic sedition ends, your self constructed world shall be set ablaze. Really digging the microcosmic inference. It's a wee bit melancholic and sad. I'm having difficulty with the final line. "Acoustic sedition".
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Apr 25, 2014 12:02:59 GMT -5
WoW....just WOW! How could i miss this piece. For some reason it makes me think of an angry woman trying to tell the world she's had enough of there shit. Really dig it and love the last line.
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Post by LSD on Jun 8, 2014 21:22:40 GMT -5
I have changed the weather a few times. Each time I change it, a part of me changes.
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Post by Bastet on Jul 16, 2014 3:07:48 GMT -5
AIIIIISSSSHHHHHHHHH! Goddamnit woman, where are you?
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Post by Aish on Jul 17, 2014 3:35:43 GMT -5
I'm here, I'm here. Calm.
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