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Post by twistedangel on Jan 8, 2014 11:20:34 GMT -5
been ten years since i ran away sorry but i aint here to stay just come back to hear wot you gotta say i figure you got a apology to pay
where i been you dont need to know sick of me scars always on show can you heal them cos i need to grow ? one little word, an i'll get up an go
me childhood spent livin in dread nights i spent hiding under me bed days i wished you both dead inherited bile invading me head
title of dad you never deserved in that mother i wos forever cursed nurture at its worst sold for a bottle an fists of an unquenchable thirst
now am older i refuse to hide payback for a life denied a debt of tears that go uncried for the years of spite that you plied
so hello mom an hello dad heres to the daughter you never had heres to my misery you both made an heres to the memories of you i hope will forever fade
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Post by windfog on Jan 8, 2014 12:18:25 GMT -5
Amen ... You can't believe ... and I can't tell you ... W.F.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jan 10, 2014 17:40:03 GMT -5
Sorry seems to be the hardest word. Love the sentiment.
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Post by Veritas on Feb 5, 2014 19:02:31 GMT -5
No... love is not the sentiment, neither is I'm sorry... Parents can't pick the child, as children cannot pick the parent. Mangled things are the prettiest after all.
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krake
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Post by krake on Jun 11, 2014 21:14:19 GMT -5
If it's life based then I wish you closure and want to hug you....but you'd probably kick me in the berries or something. In some ways I can relate and I find this piece to be very honest and clear. Of everyone from the other forums it's only you that I think of. I find you to be honest and beautiful and I was a fan of your work from the first time I read any of it. The rawness and purity of your stuff is what drew me in and this piece is no exception.
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Post by twistedangel on Jun 12, 2014 1:33:48 GMT -5
"Of everyone from the other forums it's only you that I think of."..."erm hi yeah is that the police...." actually is a really nice thing to say...never know how to reply to stuff like that well you already know am as subtle as a brick in the head most times an suffer a lack of imagination to write fairy stories...an flowers gimme hayfever an puppies/kittens make me hungry cheers krake
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mee
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Post by mee on Jul 7, 2014 7:31:03 GMT -5
now i am older i refuse to hide , despite the nothing we do sort of get to be something , we hope :_)
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