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"Moon "
Dec 16, 2013 17:47:38 GMT -5
Post by twistedangel on Dec 16, 2013 17:47:38 GMT -5
then dont complain when she dont share the duvet nice scene set over the city..ends for me on a kinda 'selfish' note
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"Moon "
Dec 17, 2013 23:00:35 GMT -5
Post by LonelyForsaken on Dec 17, 2013 23:00:35 GMT -5
Actually, I think he means he loves summer in his city. It’s a bit awkward though so I’m not sure. I think you should shorten; “But I'm not going to divide my love to you with you.”To “But I'm not going to divide my love.” Nice imagery and I like the stab of humor at the end.
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"Moon "
Dec 19, 2013 23:44:23 GMT -5
Post by windfog on Dec 19, 2013 23:44:23 GMT -5
Thank you, friends, for reading and kind comments! Well, the general idea was: love can't be divided, love can be united. Thank you! W.F.
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