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Post by twistedangel on Nov 13, 2013 9:37:12 GMT -5
A no ones daughter Damaged beyond all repair Broken doll eyed stare Being unwanted don't hurt Pain, is being born at all
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Post by windfog on Nov 13, 2013 22:58:59 GMT -5
Hi, lady! Alas ... I can't get it ... W.F.
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Post by twistedangel on Nov 14, 2013 10:41:54 GMT -5
is just me having a selfish self pity moment about shitty parents i guess..written in one of them morbid moments at the bottom of a bottle
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Post by windfog on Nov 14, 2013 13:00:30 GMT -5
Yep! Impressed! I really wish you all the best! W.F.
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Post by Veritas on Nov 14, 2013 14:56:16 GMT -5
Humans.... we are strangely fascinating animals. Being a parent is but an action. Would you actually be happier & more satisfied if they were all sunshine & rainbow carebears? Childhood to adult, it is the individuals choice & responsibility to find itself, take the final steps of growth & surpass its creator. Btw I applaud selfish pitty moments, I myself have ample self hate & self pitty.
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Post by twistedangel on Nov 15, 2013 12:59:39 GMT -5
^^^ seriously !!..you/we are all the products of are life experiences for good or bad IMO to say "Being a parent is but an action" is a total load of crap an TBH am suprised you believe that i think everyone has self pity moments tho i try to not dwell on the past to much, it somtimes has a habit of biting you on the arse when you least expect it...pfft damn you long term memory
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Post by Veritas on Nov 15, 2013 16:21:58 GMT -5
You have any idea what it is to be a parent? Or just a fantasy/ expectation? ...and why are you surprised you only know me as much as the few pieces I've writen show. Im fine with your your oppinion on my oppinion (i.e. a load of crap) )
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Post by Aish on Nov 16, 2013 3:33:32 GMT -5
Last line is a straight truth. This could turn into an interesting and worthy debate.
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krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Jun 8, 2014 6:29:33 GMT -5
A no ones daughter Damaged beyond all repair Broken doll eyed stare Being unwanted don't hurt Pain, is being born at all Outstanding! I love this.
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Pride Ed
Dark Initiate
I'll scream for you in whispers, because I always hated being too loud.
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Post by Pride Ed on Jul 10, 2014 21:39:07 GMT -5
I feel this poem... Nice work!
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