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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 6, 2004 20:35:55 GMT -5
I watch the fire, hypnotized why, I could just lie in it and let the flames lick my skin instead of his tongue.
I watch the sea, hypnotized why, I could just sink right in and let the waves tickle my skin instead of his hands
I watch the skies, hypnotized why, I could just fall into it and let it's emptiness devour me instead of his eyes
I watch your beauty, hypnotized why, I could just partake of penetrative pleasures and let nookie nerves nudge our nirvana instead of our movies of our minds
Reminds of a time when darkness shined as moon shadows seeked light. Love was made in the soothing shade of a tribute to a dead ones blight. We kissed bliss and never missed the firefly as he shined bright. Listned to words as love heard romance spoken by starlight.
It surely grew for love was true and never did we lose sight. Of our respect for each other and one anothers rights.
It can be said by all of the dead burried there within. That this love wrapped tight as a glove in this graveyard did begin.
The pearly glint on a corpses tooth reflected feelings begun as new.
Good enough for you?
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Mar 6, 2004 20:45:50 GMT -5
*applauds Mikepoet* wow, that is one great poem. we can put it into the 'tainted hearts' board as son as we can come up with a name.
good job, y'all!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 6, 2004 20:48:29 GMT -5
Best man corpse? He he he. Drive away in a herse, people are just dying to get into one of them you know. ;D You know it would take a bit of time but one could write it as being a love tale told by Best man corpse.
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Mar 6, 2004 20:51:08 GMT -5
lol
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Post by Reaper696 on Mar 10, 2004 15:16:27 GMT -5
How about "The Light of Darkness"?...
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Post by Lina Inverse on Mar 10, 2004 21:32:16 GMT -5
I kind of like the idea of a simple "Hypnotized."
......we should post this on fictionpress.net too ^_^
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Mar 11, 2004 19:28:17 GMT -5
i like 'hypnotized'. how bout i post it here & you post it there?? i've never heard of fictionpress.
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Post by Forsaken on Mar 11, 2004 19:41:56 GMT -5
Pretty cool. :smiley:
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Mar 11, 2004 21:39:30 GMT -5
:grin:
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