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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Jul 1, 2004 16:00:40 GMT -5
this is my challenge:
I will post a random word. You must write a short poem about it, but here's the catch: do it in UNDER 30 seconds! (Time yourself accurately, we are hopefully all mature people here who want to grow & learn) OK, here's a word:
REVOLVER
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jul 1, 2004 18:27:37 GMT -5
Brains and thick blood spattered wall... exit wound and powder burns fingers frozen in permanent release ...smoke dancing fromout the revolver.......
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Jul 1, 2004 18:42:17 GMT -5
whoa, that was awesome! love the imagery.
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Post by littleskinny on Jul 2, 2004 8:23:57 GMT -5
This princess enveloped in duckdown on a tower of mattresses sleeps calm. The pea no intrusive irritant with cold steel comfort under her pillow.
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jul 2, 2004 12:35:10 GMT -5
...WITH CLASS, I dug the incorporation of the "princess and pea."
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Jul 2, 2004 17:03:12 GMT -5
littleskinny, I love the originality of your piece! Great work!
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Post by Lina Inverse on Jul 5, 2004 3:07:01 GMT -5
Revolve Round and round Bullets Flying, flying Round and round Digging deep Into my mortal flesh Searing it The wound spreads Round and round...
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Post by littleskinny on Jul 5, 2004 6:55:15 GMT -5
Next word! Next word!!
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Jul 5, 2004 14:14:09 GMT -5
lol littleskinny
PAPERCUTS
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Post by littleskinny on Jul 5, 2004 14:40:42 GMT -5
(btw, purestfeelings I love your avatar and the soldier statement much much much!)
I spent Saturday inhaling bad luck at the bookies. Horses fell, no-one scored, and the odds were too steep.
Where green paper flutters and kisses when winning handing it over cuts deep
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Jul 5, 2004 14:46:39 GMT -5
thanks! I like your poem, it reminds me of the book Needful Things by stephen King. one of the characters, Dan Keeton, is like the mayor, but he loses a bunch of town money at the race track and he goes nuts and explodes the whole town after hacking off his wife's face.
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Post by littleskinny on Jul 5, 2004 14:50:46 GMT -5
Thanks - I haven't read that, but I can see how what I wrote would remind you of it.... Next word!
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jul 8, 2004 13:47:41 GMT -5
Hey I wanna play...............
the pages glide with ease the tome rests likewise in the palm, cocain and cognac sitting up, to either awaken or reflect, the fingers slide down the page slit...
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Post by littleskinny on Jul 8, 2004 14:34:44 GMT -5
magnificent! Cognac a nice touch...!
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Post by Kitten on Jul 8, 2004 14:38:57 GMT -5
the pages glide with ease the tome rests likewise in the palm, cocain and cognac sitting up, to either awaken or reflect, the fingers slide down the page slit... That is pretty good!....agree cocain and cognac fits nicely.
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