DarkMuseSick
Dark Initiate
dumb dumb , dizzy dizzy
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Post by DarkMuseSick on Jul 15, 2004 8:21:26 GMT -5
the idea of this is to have every member of this site help compose a epic (if all goes welll) group poems . . . . I chose the forum of nature becuase their's just so much to say.
RULES:
Please add on only ONE or TWO lines at a time and wait until someone else has posted another line before you add more of your own.
Rhyming is prefered, but not mandatory.
Please keep the topic of nature, but modify and add to it however you see fit.
Type your added lines to the poem, in glow form
and lastly . . . . . . be creative.
Ill start it off with a 4-liner:
[glow=red,2,300]The oceans formed by tears of the gods Fill up the Mother's cup Pollute the Lady's body, The land below erupts[/glow]
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Post by littleskinny on Jul 15, 2004 10:20:08 GMT -5
Sorry - I know you chose the nature forum, but this forum is specifically designed for group efforts, so I moved you! As long as everyone notes that this is a nature poem, then everything should be glorious!
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jul 16, 2004 19:19:15 GMT -5
into the sky above, capturing smoke flame & ash the lava spilling forth, as waves collapse...
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DarkMuseSick
Dark Initiate
dumb dumb , dizzy dizzy
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Post by DarkMuseSick on Jul 19, 2004 10:39:00 GMT -5
ok, so far we have:
[glow=red,2,300] The oceans formed by tears of the gods Fill up the Mother's cup Pollute the Lady's body, The land below erupts into the sky above, capturing smoke flame & ash the lava spilling forth, as waves collapse... [/glow]
keep it going1
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Post by Lina Inverse on Jul 19, 2004 15:15:21 GMT -5
The oceans formed by tears of the gods Fill up the Mother's cup Pollute the Lady's body, The land below erupts into the sky above, capturing smoke flame & ash the lava spilling forth, as waves collapse...
utter destruction rages the land
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eberkain
Crimson Soul
Limerick Beast
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Post by eberkain on Jul 21, 2004 13:10:07 GMT -5
The oceans formed by tears of the gods Fill up the Mother's cup Pollute the Lady's body, The land below erupts into the sky above, capturing smoke flame & ash the lava spilling forth, as waves collapse...
utter destruction, rages the land. ravage the sky, heal the sand. breathe in this world, and live remember you tide, your time, your end.
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jul 21, 2004 13:54:31 GMT -5
the end is the begining oroborous the eternal breath of gaia mother of mothers
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DarkMuseSick
Dark Initiate
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Post by DarkMuseSick on Jul 22, 2004 7:54:53 GMT -5
so far, we have:
[glow=red,2,300] The oceans formed by tears of the gods Fill up the Mother's cup Pollute the Lady's body, The land below erupts into the sky above, capturing smoke flame & ash the lava spilling forth, as waves collapse...
utter destruction, rages the land. ravage the sky, heal the sand. breathe in this world, and live remember you tide, your time, your end.
the end is the begining oroborous the eternal breath of gia mother of mothers [/glow]
. . . .
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jul 22, 2004 16:12:02 GMT -5
and... does this mean you wish to continue or dis-continue?
(though I do wish there were more than three of us)
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Post by Lina Inverse on Jul 23, 2004 20:23:59 GMT -5
so far, we have: [glow=red,2,300] The oceans formed by tears of the gods Fill up the Mother's cup Pollute the Lady's body, The land below erupts into the sky above, capturing smoke flame & ash the lava spilling forth, as waves collapse... utter destruction, rages the land. ravage the sky, heal the sand. breathe in this world, and live remember you tide, your time, your end. the end is the begining oroborous the eternal breath of gaia mother of mothers create...destroy... and create anew [/glow] . . . .
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DarkMuseSick
Dark Initiate
dumb dumb , dizzy dizzy
Posts: 66
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Post by DarkMuseSick on Aug 7, 2004 15:35:09 GMT -5
yes, i wish there were more than three of us as well
come on people!
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Aug 9, 2004 17:10:13 GMT -5
the swelter of the summer the coming flood of the monsoon
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Voltarrens
Crimson Soul
Creative Dreamer in the Night
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Post by Voltarrens on Sept 7, 2004 9:55:14 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Veiled darkness of moonless nights The inspiring coldness of coming winters[/glow]
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Post by Moonstone Maiden on Nov 16, 2004 0:27:08 GMT -5
The oceans formed by tears of the gods Fill up the Mother's cup Pollute the Lady's body, The land below erupts into the sky above, capturing smoke flame & ash the lava spilling forth, as waves collapse...
utter destruction, rages the land. ravage the sky, heal the sand. breathe in this world, and live remember you tide, your time, your end.
the end is the begining oroborous the eternal breath of gaia mother of mothers create...destroy... and create anew
the swelter of the summer the coming flood of the monsoon
Veiled darkness of moonless nights The inspiring coldness of coming winters
The winds ripple rivers, oceans and seas. only a taste is left on our lips, of what was once. Seasons arise, seasons fall, naked branches have been striped, for the soon-to-be winter.
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Claire
Demon Disciple
You are drinking from your glass of life while mine is long time empty.
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Post by Claire on Nov 21, 2004 18:15:03 GMT -5
Autumn's leaves cry out forsaken, The crimson snow appearing here, Mother's rage now blind, awaken, The waves are crushed beneath thy fear.
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