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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Feb 16, 2004 19:36:26 GMT -5
here is the starter. try to make it a bit erotic and dark, suicidal, whetever. I watch the fire, hypnotized why, I could just lie in it and let the flames lick my skin instead of his tongue. ...
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Post by Lina Inverse on Feb 16, 2004 22:14:14 GMT -5
I watch the fire, hypnotized why, I could just lie in it and let the flames lick my skin instead of his tongue. I watch the sea, hypnotized why, I could just sink right in and let the waves tickle my skin instead of his hands
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Post by deranged85 on Feb 17, 2004 22:59:30 GMT -5
I watch the fire, hypnotized why, I could just lie in it and let the flames lick my skin instead of his tongue.
I watch the sea, hypnotized why, I could just sink right in and let the waves tickle my skin instead of his hands
I watch the skies, hypnotized why, I could just fall into it and let it's emptiness devour me instead of his eyes
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 24, 2004 18:00:22 GMT -5
I watch the fire, hypnotized why, I could just lie in it and let the flames lick my skin instead of his tongue.
I watch the sea, hypnotized why, I could just sink right in and let the waves tickle my skin instead of his hands
I watch the skies, hypnotized why, I could just fall into it and let it's emptiness devour me instead of his eyes
I watch your beauty, hypnotized why, I could just partake of penetrative pleasures and let nookie nerves nudge our nirvana instead of our movies of our minds
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Feb 24, 2004 19:25:24 GMT -5
wow, i really like that one, reaper. only problem is, it goes from a female point of view (that's what i started it as) to a male.
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Post by Lina Inverse on Feb 24, 2004 22:52:20 GMT -5
Not necessarily. It could actually be from the point of view of a gay man or a woman using a dildo/strap on to penetrate the man's anus...... why she'd want to do that, I have no idea.
.................I like the gay man idea a LOT better.
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 25, 2004 15:33:10 GMT -5
Don't queer my eye, I was comin' (no pun intended[yeah right...]) from a neutral stance. If I must translate:
I'd rather have sex than think about sex...
And none of you amongst us has never thought about it, OK...
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 26, 2004 15:49:42 GMT -5
I made an adjustment, better?...
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Post by BlackRainbow on Mar 4, 2004 12:27:17 GMT -5
kewl gay poetry! lol
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Post by Reaper696 on Mar 4, 2004 15:29:47 GMT -5
Why y'all fruitin' my loop?...
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 5, 2004 23:02:23 GMT -5
I watch the fire, hypnotized why, I could just lie in it and let the flames lick my skin instead of his tongue.
I watch the sea, hypnotized why, I could just sink right in and let the waves tickle my skin instead of his hands
I watch the skies, hypnotized why, I could just fall into it and let it's emptiness devour me instead of his eyes
I watch your beauty, hypnotized why, I could just partake of penetrative pleasures and let nookie nerves nudge our nirvana instead of our movies of our minds
Reminds of a time when darkness shined as moon shadows seeked light. Love was made in the soothing shade of a tribute to a dead ones blight.
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Mar 6, 2004 19:36:12 GMT -5
ooh... purdy . Mikepoet, can you just write a finalizing verse?
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 6, 2004 20:29:23 GMT -5
I wrote more on this after I went to a site I call home. They asked me to finish it there too. The poem turned out to be sex in a graveyard.
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 6, 2004 20:31:42 GMT -5
Reminds of a time darkness shined as moon shadows seeked light. Love was made in the soothing shade of a tribute to a dead ones blight.
We kissed bliss and never missed the firefly as he shined bright. Listned to words as love heard romance spoken by starlight.
It surely grew for love was true and never did we lose sight. Of our respect for each other and one anothers rights.
This is what I have there. I would delete the last stanza here if it would be better. I'm not as dark as y'all but darker than most normal poets. An idea just hit me to describe how the lovers met in a graveyard as a finale.
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Post by xpurestxfeelingx on Mar 6, 2004 20:34:14 GMT -5
wow, it looks like this poem is gonna be really, really good!
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