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2standalone
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Faded colors passing by - All there is The faded colors of my life

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Winter Is Here
« Thread Started on Oct 27, 2009, 6:04pm »

When the cold is here
Will I crumble with the freeze?

Who am I asking
When I speak to empty air
For things to change?

Here I sit
So near to tears
Upset from nothing
But still
Wanting to wilt

Can I not drift away
with the summer leaves,
we being so alike?

High winds
Always bring us down
Being so loosely tethered
To our own hearts

It would be so easy to follow
Those hollowed remains
Of this worn and weathered life

Now battered and dejected
Fallen and forgotten
Ready to ride the wind

Is it not funny
How I wish to be with the leaves?

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This time I'm never coming back

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Re: Winter Is Here
« Reply #1 on Oct 27, 2009, 6:49pm »

wow - I love the desperate and wistful sense of longing in this piece...
are you taking on the voice of a tree?

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Re: Winter Is Here
« Reply #2 on Oct 29, 2009, 3:36pm »

hmm I didnt see it that way! interesting what things others can see that the creator can not.. that would work perfectly wouldnt it.. now it is totally different to me.. Thanks for the different view.. but no i was not thinking of the tree particularly as the main speaker. I was thinking of the spirit of summer clinging to the leaves that illistrated its beauty so well.. but i beleive there is no wrong way to percieve poetry. we all have different Psyches that allows us to see the world in different ways...

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