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Dark Rhymes « Thread Started on Sept 19, 2009, 9:48am »
Until I see a separation of church and state Until an abortion isn’t wrong when a period is late I'll bring life to rhymes and poems, like Lazarus's wisdom in a gospel written in Latin I'm past the status of Devil's Advocate My rhetoric adds to my status as sadistic I've mastered every path of my craft, demonic possession exploding like atomic weapons Holding a broken flag and disguise of a Christian
As a warrior standing tall, I'm entertained by my pain. It's been a pleasure to know yall, I fade with shadows during a campaign. I'll shock the world when I'm on stage like Kanye West did Taylor Swift at the VMAs I spit subliminal rays livin in criminal states Can't shoulder my weight, not in the past, not on this date Guns and dreams, Sins are like my lyrics reminded Sprits at highness, bust shots like I’m Columbine minded I’m the boss of this rhyme shit...Sick! With Infinite missiles Potential is endless witness my giftness is serial So switch lanes, grind gears and grab the wheel Crash and squeal, bright lights, glass and a splash of real. That's the life of a military volunteer... To scream and cheer when the harbinger of death is here! A world premiere without fear this time last year. vision's of this solar system's celestial sphere A flight without landing gear near the final frontier. A trip lacking souvenirs in the capital of Zaire, A sample of secretions after a female's cervical smear. My words penetrate deep in the vestibule of the ear. A ship at pier, a King's spear, a car in high gear A tribe's Emir, A trench yelling 'all clear' and a single tear that appeared on a pioneer Illustrated by Shakespeare.
Every one has a hard luck story... We just tell it differently
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Re: Dark Rhymes « Reply #1 on Nov 5, 2009, 11:34am »
Very long piece... I could easily see this being slam poetry. It has the flow, the rhyme, the content actually had me laughing at some points. I like the references to current events. I don't think I would change a thing about this. Its a good write and kept me reading and I didn't have to force myself to read it. Anyways, good write, can't wait to read more.
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Re: Dark Rhymes « Reply #2 on Dec 21, 2009, 8:14am »
We have all done something or some things wicked in our life. It's part of Human nature if you are dark. The best thing I have found is to try to do something good t balalnce it out. Otherwise a good write and I delt it.
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