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AuthorTopic: I Seek And Do Not Find (Read 7 times)
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Faded colors passing by - All there is The faded colors of my life



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I Seek And Do Not Find
« Result #1 on Dec 27, 2009, 5:49pm »		[Quote]

A broken landscape of smoke and ash
Blackened earth and fractured walls
Lay sprawling before me

A world of restlessness
Shallow minds
And smaller hearts

Tortured earth bleeding
Molting life as a bird would feather
Hollow and baron
Our haven has been stilled

A shiver runs through the fevered land
Tree roots crawl
Inching for sustenance
Hunger ebbing root from root

I have tried to sing the notes the universe has penned
To say the words the cosmos breathes
But nonetheless
I am a speck of dust within a swirling sea

And so
I shall never know what tears us
So completely apart
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AuthorTopic: Mad (Read 11 times)
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Take The Hurt To The Core Of My Heart and Feel it Bleeding, Pounding,Coming Apart.


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Re: Mad
« Result #2 on Dec 27, 2009, 6:06am »		[Quote]
This sounded as a confession cried out in one single breath, too painful and so devastating to leave you in one piece after realizing all meaning to sanity is lost...
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AuthorTopic: The Land Of John (Read 33 times)
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Re: The Land Of John
« Result #3 on Dec 27, 2009, 5:56am »		[Quote]
An anthem of Darkness, chilling to the bone!
It flowed really well to me, of course there's always room for perfection as Definit pointed out but this here is a masterpiece for what it is ! :)
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AuthorTopic: Flawed Core (Read 14 times)
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Re: Flawed Core
« Result #4 on Dec 27, 2009, 5:47am »		[Quote]

Dec 25, 2009, 11:15pm, definit wrote:


Demonic suicide within the demon's eyes
From out of the darkness, the horsemen ride
Chaos crawls within the land of lost.
Sad songs, snow covered in crimson frost!


Ungodly piece of poetry, Definit ! A lyrical darkness, an apocalyptic song!
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AuthorTopic: Fail (Read 40 times)
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Inside your mind



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Re: Fail
« Result #5 on Dec 26, 2009, 3:04pm »		[Quote]
thank you mate, i'm sorry for not responding for a while.....i was kind of busy .....i really appreciate it
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Follow the red Blood trails....


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AuthorTopic: DDD (Read 47 times)
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Inside your mind



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Re: DDD
« Result #6 on Dec 26, 2009, 3:01pm »		[Quote]

Dec 21, 2009, 8:19am, Mikepoet wrote:
I really do hope it works for you, me they gotta tell the truth or I cannot put stock in what is said. No matter how she looks or what her shape is, piece of mind is a hundred times more important than a piece of ass.

it's about a dream.....
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AuthorTopic: Mad (Read 11 times)
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Inside your mind



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« Result #7 on Dec 26, 2009, 2:58pm »		[Quote]


Mad



here i come, darkness
embrace me, madness !

i stride towards the abyss
with "friends" pushing me
while she kisses me
and calls for my help
Hahaha !
it has come to this !

with crazed eyes
laughing
against lies
marching
crushing principles
smashing crimson dreams
releasing sane to screams
feelings killed
meanings spilled
thoughts spit
flames unlit
soul slit
heart stripped
body ripped
blood drips
me smiling
falling
stalling life
stealing cries
leaving but a dye
a stain
Hahahaha !
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AuthorTopic: Doubting Thomas (Read 20 times)
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Re: Doubting Thomas
« Result #8 on Dec 26, 2009, 2:17pm »		[Quote]
WOW!
This is the best Christmas present I got this year :))))))))!
Thank you so much for appreciating my lyrics, Definit ! Your write here is as solid as ever !

THANK YOU!
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AuthorTopic: Doubting Thomas (Read 20 times)
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Re: Doubting Thomas
« Result #9 on Dec 25, 2009, 11:47pm »		[Quote]
FANTASTIC

"There’s nothing left inside
Not even broken bones.
Who’s to tell I’m still alive?
I have fallen long ago."

Am really feeling that.

"What if heaven’s had enough?
What if we’re unworthy of love?
My whole life I’ve refused to believe in
The one who now watches me die unforgiving."

Am just in awe!

I fail at being able to describe the scale on this piece.
Inspiring, so much so I just feel the need to sing along with yeah.
Hope ya don't mind but the rush of images I got from this piece
is just flowing out!


***I administer first aid of the heart
Fast as white lightning through Nylon cable!
None fables through cryptic acts enabled
the blood doesn't trickle, it sprays!

Chorus:
Bills piling...causing dismay.
Don’t mean to sing a burden.
But I harden this way!
This my vision of a dark dismal day!

If no one hears you cry, can a soul be saved?
Can the illustrious life I am living in pave the way?
I walk alone, death all around my surroundings
as sound of bag pipes skim the landscape
war on horseback, rolling tanks
lost psalms, dropping bombs
A child screams for mom.
How bravely they cried
How bravely they died...

Chorus:
Bills piling...causing dismay.
Don’t mean to sing a burden.
But I harden this way!
This my vision of a dark dismal day!

Dodged traps, embraced death camps.
survived onslaught, cryptic lamps
Leave a treacherous crater
with a push of a detonator
Muslims and Christians at peace.
a dream I don't want to cease.***
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AuthorTopic: silent (Read 43 times)
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Re: silent
« Result #10 on Dec 25, 2009, 11:19pm »		[Quote]
I like the way you put this together.
Feels like reading a letter.
Great visuals, great emotion.
This piece only gets better the further you read it.
*Tips his hat*
Nice job.
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